Argument
The excerpts from Patrick
Finn’s book, Literacy with an Attitude,
were a bit of a challenge to read this week – not just because of the huge
amount of information we’re given at once, but because Finn covers so much
information about literacy in American schools, it was difficult to sort through
it all to find his main argument.
In
some ways, I think Finn’s argument is a combination of the arguments of a few
other authors that we’ve read this year. When I started reading, I found strong
connections to other articles pretty quickly. I first noticed a connection to
Lisa Delpit’s work beginning on the second page, and her themes echo throughout
the rest of the excerpt. The quote that caught my eye was in the preface:
“The discourse (ways
of communication and the beliefs, attitudes, values, habits, and behaviors that
underlie them – especially attitudes related to authority, conformity, and
power) of working class communities is at odds with the discourse of the
schools. This makes acquisition of school discourse and powerful literacy difficult
for working-class children.”
This immediately made me think of
Delpit and her argument about the rules and codes of the culture of power. In
her argument, she states that the reason that some students (particularly
students of color) don’t learn or perform well in school is that they don’t
understand the language – or “discourse” and Finn words it – of the culture of
power. Since these children cannot communicate with the culture of power, they cannot
be successful within it. Not just in school, but in society. This theme pops up
many times in Finn’s work when he discusses literacy – if lower-class students
cannot learn to be successful on their own in school, they cannot learn to be
successful in society or in the workforce.
I also began to notice similar themes
from the Brown vs. Board of Education readings come up here. In his preface, Finn
explains that literacy and education for the working class is considered “dangerous”
by the affluent, literate elite:

Lastly, I saw many connections to the
Kahne and Westhiemier piece, “In the Service of What?” in this excerpt. As I
read through Chapter 13 of Literacy with
and Attitude, I noticed the idea of change in service learning come back
into the picture. Finn talks about Paulo Freire and his work in educating poor
adults with literacy campaigns. Reading about his work, I noticed similar ideas
from Kahne and Westheimer’s argument about charity vs. change and the
discussion we had in class. Freire was working toward a world where the culture
gap between the rich and poor would close “not only in terms of wealth and
income but in terms of quality of life.” Raising money for the poor communities
alone would not fix the problem of illiteracy that these communities face. But
as Finn explains, “Freire’s vision was
one of class struggle. It was about empowering the powerless as a class so they can stand up for
themselves. This is what made him a transforming intellectual” (172). If Kahne and Westheimer were to look
at this situation, I think they would definitely call Freire’s work a change rather
than a charity.
Putting all of these arguments
together, I think each one is a piece of Finn’s overall argument, which includes
the ideas of the culture of power, economic inequality, and change that can be
made to fix the system. This quote from Finn sums it up pretty nicely: “I’d like to hope that a child’s
expectations are not determined on the day she or he enters kindergarten, but
it would be foolish to entertain such a hope unless there are some drastic
changes to be made” (25).
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Hi Julie! I really liked your post this week. Delpit was a common connection but I liked how you also connected it to Kahne and Westheimer as well as the Brown vs Board of Education! I didn't notice it when I read but it fits perfectly with what you said. And that last quote that summed up Finn's piece was absolutely perfect! Great job:)
ReplyDeleteHey girl! I thought your post this week was awesome! I didn't even think about pulling connections from someone other than Delpit! Your argument was spot on and your quotes were just so awesome! This was a great post! :)
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